Would you like a balloon, my dear?
Come closer, lots to see
Don’t be scared, don’t shed a tear
Explore the underworld with me
Come closer, lots to see
Your parents won’t be mad at you
Explore the underworld with me
There’s nothing else round here to do
Your parents won’t be mad at you
Come see my sewer circus
There’s nothing else round here to do
No one down here can hurt us
Come see my sewer circus
Just a bit closer, that’s right
No one down here can hurt us
Let’s play up an appetite
Just a bit closer, that’s right
Now I’ve got you by the arm
Let’s play up an appetite
You’ll love my skeleton farm
Now I’ve got you by the arm
Don’t be scared, don’t shed a tear
You’ll love my skeleton farm
Would you like a balloon, my dear?

Form: Pantoum
Written for W3 Wea’ve Written Weekly
The other day, I heard a man on the street say to his young daughter, “That movie made my entire generation afraid of clowns,” and instantly knew which movie he was referring to.
Pantoumilicious!
LikeLiked by 1 person
haha thanks Ron 🙂
LikeLike
Nice and creepy…love it!🖤
LikeLiked by 1 person
thank you 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
My pleasure. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Even reading the poem gives our creepy vibes.
LikeLiked by 1 person
This is fantastic! The rhyme is flawless and the creepy cajoling nature of the voice is spot on! I love how the opening question is repeated at the end. Great work, cognacproject 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much, Sunra 🙂 ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Your poem captures the creepiness well!
LikeLiked by 1 person
thank you 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Sylvia ~ I LOVE this. Your poem more than does the film justice!
❤
David
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you David ❤ ❤ ❤
LikeLike
Hi Sylvia, I have to say, I really enjoyed your poem the most, it was so effortless and creepily persuasive! I hereby nominate you Poet of the Week. Do you accept? 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Sylvia, I’ve sent you an email with “next steps” ~ mazal tov on being selected as our next W3 “Poet of the Week”!
❤
David
LikeLiked by 2 people
Yay thank you I’m so honored, I will email you back with some guidelines shortly =D
LikeLike
Thank you so much, Sunra, of course I accept! I’m very honored to be selected, thank you ❤ ❤ ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Awesome 💖 You’re most welcome!
LikeLiked by 1 person