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Would you like a balloon, my dear?
Come closer, lots to see
Don’t be scared, don’t shed a tear
Explore the underworld with me

Come closer, lots to see
Your parents won’t be mad at you
Explore the underworld with me
There’s nothing else round here to do

Your parents won’t be mad at you
Come see my sewer circus
There’s nothing else round here to do
No one down here can hurt us

Come see my sewer circus
Just a bit closer, that’s right
No one down here can hurt us
Let’s play up an appetite

Just a bit closer, that’s right
Now I’ve got you by the arm
Let’s play up an appetite
You’ll love my skeleton farm

Now I’ve got you by the arm
Don’t be scared, don’t shed a tear
You’ll love my skeleton farm
Would you like a balloon, my dear?

photo by Wilson Vitorino, Pexels

Form: Pantoum

Written for W3 Wea’ve Written Weekly

The other day, I heard a man on the street say to his young daughter, “That movie made my entire generation afraid of clowns,” and instantly knew which movie he was referring to.

24 Comments Add yours

  1. Ron. says:

    Pantoumilicious!

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    1. haha thanks Ron 🙂

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  2. Julydase says:

    Nice and creepy…love it!🖤

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      1. Julydase says:

        My pleasure. 🙂

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  3. Sadje says:

    Even reading the poem gives our creepy vibes.

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  4. Sunra Rainz says:

    This is fantastic! The rhyme is flawless and the creepy cajoling nature of the voice is spot on! I love how the opening question is repeated at the end. Great work, cognacproject 🙂

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    1. Thank you so much, Sunra 🙂 ❤

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  5. Your poem captures the creepiness well!

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  6. Sylvia ~ I LOVE this. Your poem more than does the film justice!


    David

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    1. Thank you David ❤ ❤ ❤

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  7. Sunra Rainz says:

    Hi Sylvia, I have to say, I really enjoyed your poem the most, it was so effortless and creepily persuasive! I hereby nominate you Poet of the Week. Do you accept? 🙂

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    1. Sylvia, I’ve sent you an email with “next steps” ~ mazal tov on being selected as our next W3 “Poet of the Week”!


      David

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      1. Yay thank you I’m so honored, I will email you back with some guidelines shortly =D

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    2. Thank you so much, Sunra, of course I accept! I’m very honored to be selected, thank you ❤ ❤ ❤

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      1. Sunra Rainz says:

        Awesome 💖 You’re most welcome!

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