Life
As you
Knew it is
Over; Complete
Take a moment, breathe
I know it’s overwhelming
But you’ll get used to this place
Everyone loves it
Check out this view
This is the
Meadow
Of
No fear
Where you will
Always feel safe
Every single meal’s
An all-you-can-eat buffet
Not possible to gain weight
Don’t worry ’bout that
No alcohol
But you won’t
Need it
Cause
Nothing
Will bother
You anymore
Loved ones will arrive
Eventually, but for now
You can relive all your dreams
Watch them come to life
This is the path
Follow me
Heaven’s
Here

Written for Crimson’s Creative Challenge
and Moonwashed Weekly Prompt: New Dawnings
and Tanka Tuesday: Synonyms of New & Experience
Form: Arkquain Swirl
Heavenly rendered, Sister. Beautiful (w/ a photo to match!)
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Thank you, Ron 🙂 The photo was from another prompt 🙂
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Wow! A truly glorious piece, Sylvia! I read this over and over again because it expresses such peace and tranquility. Thank you for joining in and wishing you a fabulous 2023.💖
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Thank you so much, Eugenia! Happy New Year, I hope you have a great 2023 too 🙂
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Such an amazing read. Leaves one with a feeling of calm… 🤍
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Thank you, Destiny ❤
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Pleasures…
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You’ve written a beautiful poem Sylvia and it feels like a slice of heaven
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Thank you so much, Sadje ❤
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😻❤️
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It surely does have the light of heaven about it. I like your fantasy, Sylvia.
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Thank you 🙂 ❤
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You’re welcome.
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I’ve heard that one’s entire life flashes through in the last 15 minutes of life. Somehow, your poem took me to that zone. And I won’t be waiting for anybody to arrive.
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Makes me want to head right over.
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Well hopefully not any time soon lol 🙂
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It’s not in my immediately sight, but you never know.
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That is beautifully done. Love it 😊 😊 😊
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Thank you ❤
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😊 😊 😊
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Wow! The Arkquain Swirl is a hard form, Sylvia, and you rocked it! What an uplifting message of hope. Happy New Year, my friend.
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Thank you so much, Colleen!!! Happy New Year to you too =D ❤
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Thank you! 🧡
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This is so friggin’ good, Sylvia – I wrote one of these once… I’ll have to try to dig it up 🙂
~David
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Thank you so friggin’ much, David! Lol 🙂 Well let me know if you find it 🙂
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I found it!
Apparently I’ve only written this one so far… maybe I’ll write another for this week’s Tanka Tuesday! You’ve inspired me 🙂
❤
David
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Well that’s lovely, so comforting 💜💜
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Thank you 🙂
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This is a brilliant poem. I want a place of no fear too. A place where no one can ever get to me again and do bad things to me, I love meadows
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Thank you 🙂 I would love to have a place like that, too.. I had a certain meadow in Yosemite in mind when I wrote this 🙂
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Delightful. Tranquility dawns on me.
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Thank you, Indira 🙂
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My pleasure.
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Your poem filled me with a sense of peace, Sylvia! Just beautiful!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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Thank you so much, Yvette ❤
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