Anticipation
Tuesday
Nothing to do
Except go to yoga
Then wait around for some good news
From school
Lonely
Open Tinder
Swipe right on everyone
Cause I’ve been alone long enough
It’s sad
Yoga
Roll out my mat
These girls are all so young
But no one is as flexible
As me
Craving
Should I buy one?
Store is on the way home
Would alcohol make me feel fine?
Maybe
Drive home
Try not to look
As I pass by his place
He’s out of sight, but on my mind
Just breathe
Tuesday
Open Tinder
These girls are all so young
Would alcohol make me feel fine?
Just breathe
Written for Tanka Tuesday: Share Your Day
The form I chose was Crown Cinquain from the Poetry Cheat Sheet
Amazing & effective construction, S, working your way down to the closer. Well done. Thanks.
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Thank you Ron ❤ ❤ ❤
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*applause*
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ty 🙂
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Wow, this is a very strong piece, Sylvia.
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Thank you, Britta! 🙂
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Excellent poetry
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Thank you, Sadje 🙂
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You’re most welcome
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Sylvia, this is excellent!! I love how you shared the events from your day and week. 💜
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Thank you so much, Colleen =D
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You’re welcome.
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Breathing is key. (K)
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Truth
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